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The Haunting of R.Heydrich by ~CWnerd12:iconCWnerd12:





The Haunting of Reinhard Heydrich

The ghosts cannot settle,
but they do not haunt—
they scream broken glass
and dance in the flame
of a thousand torches to synagogues
and a crumbling Shabbos.

Yes, you see the beasts of men
and the fire reflects in your blue eyes.
You make the appropriate calls.
Did a ghost ever come to breathe on your neck
And whisper... You can stop this.
No— you don’t believe in ghosts.
You hang up the phone, lean back in your chair.

The future is visiting you:
There will be millions of them—
sitting on your desk
lying in the street
walking beside you down hallways
waiting outside your door
screaming as you pass,
throwing themselves before you
arms lashing out to try and catch you
smiling, laughing, weeping, screaming and mocking.
They know your secrets
everything you hate about yourself
and hiss in your ear about every weakness.
They wrap their fingers around you neck and ask
Do you feel this, my friend?
and you insist, no, there’s no such thing as ghosts
even if they’re choking you.

The hot ash of your cigarette falls onto your desk
and leaves a burn you will never get rid of.
©2007-2009 ~CWnerd12
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Watch me perform this!
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Okay, so I've combined two poems again. I just thought that "Ghosts" and "The Centre Cannot Hold" were too similar and would make a stronger poem together. And whaddaya know, I was right!

Anyway, poem inspired by the MAGNIFICENT "Lenore's Song" by Yunyu [link] [link] (the myspace version has an extra chorus or whatever than the video version, but the video is AMAZING)

Anyway, there's a lot of debate as to what Heydrich's role in Krystallnacht was. One book I've read blamed it all on him, another book said he had very little to do with it and blamed Goebbels. So I just went with the moral implications of Krystallnacht: this is the beginning of a long long road that eventually ends with the attempted exterination of the Jewish race.
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This is brilliant, I love the idea of being haunted by future ghosts. My favourite part was: "Do you feel this, my friend?/ and you insist, no, there’s no such thing as ghosts/ even if they’re choking you," because I love the stubbornness and denial shown in these lines. Just to be picky, should "There will be millions of them" have a lowercase "t" at the beginning? :shrug:

I think the first stanza set this up really well and the last stanza ends it perfectly; the subject seems almost trivial after the strong images in the previous stanzas, but the message I got from the lines, that our actions are irreversible, is so powerful and harsh - I like the contrast between subject and meaning.

Anyway, I'll stop rambling now, the point is that I like this poem.

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As always, I really love the story and imagery you put into this... very macabre visions dance in my mind here.
Wonderful work.
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Love the contrasting elements in this... and the whole atmosphere... MACABRE! :giggle:
I can see how Lenore's Song inspired you. *nodnod* *-*

Great job as usual! :hug:

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